A Short Story

Short but beautifully executed.

Man, this VN leaves the player with a lot of questions haha. I just will post one:

Is the story of the child and a porcupine, perhaps the last moments of the survivor and his wife? :(

This is the only viable interpretation I could find to this VN.

Thanks for sharing this under a libre license btw!

I really enjoyed this! The aesthetic is really solid, you were really able to turn a simplistic art style into something more interesting and slightly unnerving. 

I'm also a fan of the story, which feels like a sad dream with a close friend that you haven't talked to in a long time. I enjoyed the dreamlike tone and the melancholy feeling you maintained throughout the game.

Excellent work!

Great stuff dude, glad to see you creating like this!

Wow, I really liked this! I wasn't sure what I was expecting, but I was pleasantly surprised by what I received! The atmosphere is lovely, and I think the sound and music effects were wonderfully utilized.

Even though we aren't given the full story of this world, we can start to piece things together. Something happened to all the people in this world, and our storyteller is the only one who remains. We are some sort of strange traveler who seems to phase in and out of this world. Or, maybe, this story teller receives multiple visitors who all appear the same in their eyes. Something supernatural is happening, and I like it!

The story of Amari and the porcupine made me sad, but it was a nice story and I think there is much to take away from it, so I appreciate it being shared with me!

If I recall, I heard this is your first game, and for a first game it appears you have a phenomenal understanding of the Ren'py system! There was even stuff I caught myself wondering how you did, like the audio blips when our storyteller is talking! I think that was an excellent touch and aesthetically the game appears very well put-together. 

I really enjoyed this experience! It was a short story, and a nice one! Leaves you wondering in a good way. I'm glad you made it and shared it with us!